Challenge 2/17 - Karmen | Grade 6

The race

Nearly there! Now all I had to do was swim across the wide lake and I would win the race. I could see the orange trophy on the other side of the lake. Within a minute I found myself swimming  to the other side. Wait... is that a crocodile!?!? I swam as fast as I could and felt something " chomp " on my foot. Turns out my "crocodile" was just a little fish. My lungs were burning. Pushing through I swam to the other side of the lake. I walked out the lake and collapsed, I had won the race!

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Challenge 2/17 - Willow | Grade 4

The Sneeze

I was on my way to see the orange crocodile with my friend, Alex. We reached an interesting looking bench and Alex nearly sat down, but I grabbed his hand and whispered "it's a crocodile sleeping, DO NOT WAKE HIM". "I think I'm gonna sneeze, ACHOO!". Oh no! The crocodile woke up and started chasing us through the valley. All of a sudden while crossing a wide bridge the ground fell from beneath us, the bridge collapsed and within seconds we were in the water!

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Challenge 2/17 - India | Grade 4

The Strange Crocodile Species

I was walking with my mom to the shops when I spotted a flyer out the corner of my eye. I stopped to look and it read: "Zoo" I read down further and it said "The Marvelous Orange Crocodile species". I begged my mom to go and she finally said yes. The next day we went to the zoo. We were heading towards the orange Crocodiles when I spotted something orange, I shouted "look" I ran to the cage and looked through the bars. The strange creatures were in a hurry I could not figure out why? I saw some of the crocodiles collapsed, tired and sleepy within the wide tunnel.

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Challenge 2/17 - Liyabona | Grade 6

The cave

"It's coming!" panted Angeline. The crocodile is coming. This wasn't an ordinary crocodile, it was scaly with a wide orange body. "We're trapped,  I can't see an exit out of this cave!"  cried Sarah. Within the cave the girls heard weird noises , suddenly there was rumbling coming from above . Angeline look at your far right, the roof has collapsed ! said Sarah. Luckily the crocodile had lost  interest of eating the girls. The girls saw a gap and daylight in the cave and knew that was the only way they would get out of the cave, so they crawled and crawled .

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Challenge 2/17 - Mitchell | Grade 4

A beautiful creature.

There was a little boy named James. He wanted to go to Rainbowland to see the wide orange crocodile. James loved crocodiles, all kinds. So when he got there he saw the Orange Crocodile running, he could not belive it, and within a moment the crocodile collapsed. James wanted the Orange Crocodile, so he went into the cage and the Orange crocodile ran after him. then James fell in the water, but the crocodile just wanted to help James get back up. James turned around and thanked the crocodile. And just like that James woke up. Wow, what a nice crocodile he thought to himself!

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Challenge 2/17 - Rosie | Grade 6

Echo

"I'm not who think I am." She whispered to me. "Who are you then?" I asked as if it wasn't that serious. She sat there without saying a word for a few seconds, while we watched the crocodile pull against its chain. All you could hear was the chain and the sound of me kicking the orange, stone wall. But there was now way out. We were stuck in a cell, with a crocodile and a few wooden boxes. The silence became deep for a second, when a crack echoed and soon the sound of a million stone bricks collapsing...

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