Tuesday, 7 June 2016

Challenge 4 - Karmen Grade 5

Winter

Winter is my favourite season... Picture this, a row of fluffy pillows and a warm fleece blanket for me to lie underneath, watching a good movie, in fact my favourite movie..Twilight. The fire in the fireplace heats up the room and I love the crackling sound of wood burning. I sip on my piping hot milo and watch the sparks fly between the wolves and the vampires on the screen.  And when I take a long breath through my nose, I smell the sweet smell of the potato chips roasting in the oven..... I really do love winter.

Karmen
Grade 5

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Challenge 4 - Thato Grade 5

Being a Human

Today was another usual day. I could hear the chirps of birds in trees. I was sitting on my branch watching the sun rise. The sun shined on the row of houses in which the humans lived. I looked at the houses and wandered what humans were like. I decided to fly around and see. I passed a house with a rather chubby human sitting on the couch eating chips and sweet snacks. I watched him longer. He did nothing but lie around and eat. If that was all humans did, then it was better being a bird like me. 

Thato
Grade 5

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Challenge 4 - Rosie Grade 5

Lies

The water glistened, and the waves sang
A song so sweet, but oh so sad
Chips of my world fell from the sky
Grew long wings, and started to fly
Petals dropped, all in a row
Waiting for the crashes of the waves to grow 
People said this was all a lie
But that's not true and this is why.

Rosie
Grade 5

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Challenge 4 - Erin Grade 5

The Chips

There they were, the most delicious looking chips. Guess what? Mom just bought them for me. As I bit into one of the chips, it was not what I expected. It was...sweet. Then mom asked, "How're the chips?" "They are so delicious," I lied. Then a row of birds caught my eye. When mom looked away, I threw those chips at them. Mom turned around and said, "Look at all those birds fly away and look Abby, that pigeon has the same chips as you in its mouth. What a coincidence. Wait where are your chips?" Mom asked.

Erin
Grade 5

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Challenge 4: Caitlin Grade 6

The Butterfly Effect

I have to get to the machine! It's going to leave without me! I was running when I stepped on a fly. Will that change something!? I rammed into the machine just as there was a flash and it started leaving. I got back to present day, 2050. I went to the past to test my time machine. I got home, and was greeted by my roommate. "Lie is row and chips chair?" She said. "What?" I asked, "you're not making any sense." "Sweet is what dog table?" She replied. What did the fly have to do with language?

Caitlin Adams
Grade6

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Monday, 6 June 2016

Challenge 4 - Andreia Grade 6

I'm about to tell you a story. I won't tell you if it's a lie.
It's  all about a land that's made of chips and types of pie.
There are elephants to ride on, and boats in which you row,
A river of chocolate that tastes so sweet, with waves that go to and fro.

A land that has many unicorns, and rainbows all around,
and a happy mayor made of gummy bears that moves from town to town.
This land is quite perfect, a lovely sight to see.
And of course this land is wonderful for you and me!

Andreia
Grade 6

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Sunday, 5 June 2016

Challenge 4 - Kira Grade 6

100 Words To Describe A Chip Packet


I look at the chip packet on the floor and as I look at it I notice details I don't normally pay attention to. For example the chip packet had a spot in the middle where you would normally be able to see the chips... It was empty. On the back of the packet was a  sweet picture of a squirrel running down rows of nuts... The chips where nut flavored. Underneath the picture of the squirrel was the motto of the company that made the chips "Together with chips we will lie and fly." The chips where not successful.

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